Because of you

Pain consuming

Anger growing

Rage wanting out

Scream

Yell

Hit

Write

But its still an endless fight

A struggle to control

Oh how did i become such a fool

You hurt me once and then again

But i just keep letin you in

This is the last time im done

I've bottled all this

Pain, Anger, and Rage

and now i'll useit to hurt you

I'll get you back

you will see because this

Rage has consumed me

My pain will show through

And my anger is going to SCARE YOU

 

Reviews

[Muse]

I think there is some scary in all of us. We all have our limits, and it appears you have found yours. Well done.

[Tasha]

this gave me chills! i enjoyed it a lot.

[Dark Angel ~]

"Scream/Yell/Hit/Write"
maybe it's just my randomness today, but I laughed when I saw that part. It's like "violence, violence, violence... writing!" LOL... maybe it's just that I'm tired from my AP exam :P
It was a very powerful poem, I related to it... except, I'm not a scary person... or a mean person... so when I was hurt...I went into a shell...
But why am I telling you about my personal dilemmas? I'm supposed to be commenting on the poem, WHICH WAS AWESOME!!! :D

[unknown]

A powerful write that gives the chills!

[Sylo's Rose]

shall we go hunting? THis poem makes me wanna go hunt :)

[SpokenWord]

Nothing like a scorned woman to change the path of a man's life in a matter of seconds. Pain and Pleasure are so closely related, what brought us pleasure yesterday can be truly painful today. Revenge feels good but after it does little to actually heal, yet when in the moment that feeling is so strong that it takes over us sometimes. Strong writing of strong feelings good job.