Missing you

Wrote a long time ago

It hurts so much

this pain pulling, tugging at my heart

I feel im being torn apert.

I hear your name

I try to remember your face

All i think about is you

Yes, we had problems

But we always made it through

I do miss you

It hurts to think your really gone

I  screwed up  know i did

So I deserve this pain

This pain that tears through my whole body

Im so messed up when i think about you

I don't know the emotion to feel

We had so many, all so different

So i cry the night away

as the pain of you

tears my heart apart.

Reviews

[Sylo's Rose]

dont cry alone. itsn ot good for your health. this is a good way of showing how you feel. I hope that you will do more so you dont have all those emotions built up in side waiting to burst. cuz when they do i dont want to be on the recieving in end. i dont feel like dying right now. :) love you

[Tasha]

this is such a sad and wonderful write. i have been in that situation before, you described your feelings very well in this piece. things get easier, trust me.

[lostboy]

love is mostly found accidently and lost for other reasons its one place where finders keepers does not apply.

[Jibin]

This feels a little sad to me...
An excellent write and i love this as always.....

[Suchita]

PAINFUL...

[unknown]

Know exactly how that feels, thanks for sharing!

[quinfinn]

this speaks honestly of conflicted feelings and brings the reader into a very identifiable experience. a strong portrait of your inner heart and nicely worded.

[SpokenWord]

One of the thing that I noticed time does is slowly erase little details about people who gone from our life like the sound of their voice for instance. Your poem is full of a loss and the pain that comes with it as she misses someone deeply. Good write.