This Rain

Sitting here in this rain,

as it slowly washes away my pain.

It's all lost for this moment,

and i feel free but i know this won't last

it will only be a memory.

As the rain starts to stop,

it all comes back.

traveling on the rainbow

and falling back into my lap.

Reviews

[Kes]

Aw, I really like this. I take huge inspiration from the rain.
Great piece, I know just how that feels! :)

[Tasha]

this was beautiful. i loved it and rainbows. amazing :)

[Jibin]

Rain is always a different feeling, and you sketched up it very well. love this write.

[Dai Edenburough]

I LIKE THIS ONE!!! RAINBOWS!!!

[wolf68]

rain washes all sorrows away but rain can never last forever

[quinfinn]

very cleverly worded and image filled write. i really like this one!

[Letemdangle]

Very realistic. I can smell the wet air.