No More

The boy and the girl

They had such a fling

It was a year long thing

Their love was something

Never to be compared

Until one day something happened

Together no more

Its all lost fprever

In their dreams it will haunt them

Their love for one another always there

They are forever in eacothers lives

but never again together

Reviews

[Tasha]

i loved the reality of it. sometimes love can't live on forever. outstanding.

[Jibin]

A good job, simply written reality. Love this....

[Chris]

I was craving a bit more complexity but emotions certainly did the job here.

And btw watch the typos

[George Korolog]

Nice job here and you are improving steadily. Watch the typos. Liked this.

[quinfinn]

beautifully warm and nicely worded. i am at ease with these feelings for i too have been to that place in your heart...just now , most recently.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

A marvelous poem!

[SpokenWord]

I think this happens all the time, it is sad but a truth in life. Were not meant to be forever with just anyone only with the one that is made for us. Nice write.

[MAC]

i like this...has that predetermined thing going. love exchanged but it just shouldn't be forever. i enjoy the realism poetry that you bleed out,