Elementry school friend

Elementry school friend

A Poem by *~DreamDeamon~*
"

To a friend of mine who has bee here even though it was just elementry we were friends and now friends just again

"

A small girl sits in the corner

just a few hours ago

she was the bully

but her little world has been crushed

the kids all now make fun of her

all but one,

her true friend,

her elementry school friend,

only problem is,

is that it took her leaving, moving away

to realize just how much help he was.

Now this little girl is all grrown up

and hasjust found elementry friend again.

And he isstill there,

just to talk,

or just to read,

he is still here encouraging,

and weather he knows it or not

pushing and helping.

But she has now ran into a problem

she wants to say thank you but in an

unconspiuous way, i guees just for today

she will say it,

 

                    Thank you

© 2011 *~DreamDeamon~*


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Posted 13 Years Ago


i liked this. good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow i wish i had a friend like that. btw u miss spelled like three words

Posted 13 Years Ago


nicely expressed and cleverly done. forthright and unsanctimonious. well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


She is the hardest of friends to have and be loyal too. Saying thank you and meaning it is so easy and cost nothing at all but a few seconds. Anything less is just taking someone for granit but some guys like to be that guy and there is nothing wrong with it. Great little write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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