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A Poem by *~DreamDeamon~*
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not finished but what i have so far

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Running Running

So far away but I

still can't escape this pain

Nowhere to go

Just lost in this place

Going in circles im

Falling Falling

down into the dark

to the depths of all my pain

my deamons clawing at me

pulling at my heart

tearing it apart

Breaking Breaking

im gooing crazy

to lost to get out, too much pain

im tangled up, wraped up in it all

© 2011 *~DreamDeamon~*


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sounds like an excerpt from "nightmare on elm street" terrifying and confusing.
very solid write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just breathe and the path will be clear is what my elders use to tell me. Pain is as much physical as it mental. Interesting in this poem the person runs and only finds themself more intangled in a painful grip, it is the running that gets them lost I think. I enjoyed this read it was like a dream or story. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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*~DreamDeamon~*
*~DreamDeamon~*

Chiloquin, OR



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