The Door

A borrowed line poem (first line)

There was a secret panal in this heart of his,

I must find it

I need to find it,

I must get into his heart to

know he truely loves me,

to see his hearts desire.

I am on a mission to find the secret panal,

I have the key,

I just need the door,

Where is it,

Where did it go?

I must find it....

                     I must!

Reviews

[lostboy]

i hope the door finds you.

[Dark Angel ~]

I wish this were longer!!

[Tasha]

i enjoyed this, i do feel like you could have kept going like what happened once you found the key.

[quinfinn]

lovely poem and cleverly conceived. kudos...