A Flaw

A borrowed line poem (first line)

There are openings in our lives,

openings that let things in,

love & hatered, good & bad.

The opening can be a blessing

or a nightmare.

Its just a simple flaw in our soul.

Reviews

[Tasha]

this was wonderful.

[lostboy]

this is the depth i expect from you.

[quinfinn]

and aptly put, your concept of this fatal flaw. nice!