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written for a friend when he was feeling bad about his days..

When the longing comes around,

one mustn't frown

the good days are near,

they should be clear.

No more tears

all we want is to

break those fears.

Take the sorrow and

just wait for tomorrow.

It's one day closer,

to those joyful days.

Waiting for whats right,

may bring some pain

but in the end there

will be no rain.

Just a light to guide

you right into the arms

of the girl who loves you

and only wants to

keep you safe,

love you unconditionally,

and have you for hers

but she must also wait.

Reviews

[Tasha]

this was beautiful. you are a very good friend.

[quinfinn]

a very hopeful and deeply endearing piece of clever poetry. nicely written and
functionally expressive, this is a plea for future blessings that emotes beautifully.
nice work.

[Matthew Kult]

Well I hope this helped your friend. Very emotional, and very honest. A great work. Flow was a little bumpy, but in my opinion, the meaning and the words are much more important that the flow.

Regards,

Matthew