Nowhere to go

I have hit rock bottom

And even though i have

a sharp rock in my side

I get back up and

i wonder how i do it

I run to a cave so

shallow and cold

I take out the rock

And throw it to the ground

All bloody and battered

I trudge through the cave

going deeper and deeper

till I find that it splits

four different ways

I throw myself to

the ground and sit

I wait in wonder never

know if I will be

found dead or alive

or even at all

 

Reviews

[quinfinn]

wow, very nice way of expressing that all encompassing predicament of which way to turn after suffering and in pain. excellent metaphor here. nice job!