They

They

A Poem by *~DreamDeamon~*

There are only a few

that she can trust

they are the only ones

who are always there

They are they only ones

who know her weaknesses

they hold her fear on

their shoulders only so

she knows they are there for her

she never goes anywhere

without them in mind

she knows that to keep

them close, keeps her safe

and they are the only ones

who have seen her cry

and breakdown in dispear

but they are still there

© 2011 *~DreamDeamon~*


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this was beautiful, i enjoyed it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice work, and i can relate to it....

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have someone on my left and right shoulder always talking and listening to me...great poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautiful and conscience gripping. i love the feel of these lines.desperate yet secure. wonderful...

Posted 13 Years Ago


there is nothing like those who support you when all is lost...nice work on this poem...

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a different way of saying "Thank you" to those that support you. I think that this is a poem that all girls need to read and say thank you to all thier friends. Grand way of just saying "thank you".

Posted 13 Years Ago



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*~DreamDeamon~*
*~DreamDeamon~*

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