She

She

A Poem by *~DreamDeamon~*

She is the wanderer

She is the one who haunts you

She is the one you love but you won't show it

She is the one who balences your life

although you don't see it

She is the only one who has seen you cry

She is the one you would trust with your life

She is the one who helps you when you fall

She is the one who gives you her heart

even though you do not know it

She is the one who needs you

like you need her

© 2011 *~DreamDeamon~*


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i liked this a lot. you have truly showed your talent with this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


reciprocation of respect and love at its best. compelling and original.
more!

Posted 13 Years Ago


switch she to he and it will sound like me. lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes she is the one who wrote it. Good eye! :) hehe XD

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

she is the one who is writing this wonderful poem,..
nicely done..i really like it..flow is awesome:)
these feeling are so similar..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's a neat one! Favorite line: She is the one who balances your life. Good job girl!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 30, 2011
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*~DreamDeamon~*
*~DreamDeamon~*

Chiloquin, OR



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