The All...

The all seeing eye never criticise people,

the all knowing brain blames people,

the all hearing ear just listens to people,

While the all speaking mouth says everything

the eye sees, the mind thinks, and the ear hears,

with every slip of the tongue.

Reviews

[Phillip Dohman]

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[lostboy]

the all knowing brain would not blame very quick.its good to do more listening than speaking.

[unknown]

So true, short and sweet!

[Daisy Morgy]

I love that its to the piont, and that the piont to get across is very well wrote even though of its length wich i think adds to its greatness!

[quinfinn]

trite, uniquely concise and to the point. delightfully playful while simply irresistible.
this is a well conceived and clever romp into the realm of imagery. nice!

[Dai Edenburough]

This piece remings me of the song, "The Fool on the Hill" by the Beatles (I think thats what it's called).

[Eiken]

Nice one:)