Bright Light Dark Night

For when you can't tell the difference between light and dark.

Bright light

Dark night

Pull me in 

Hold me tight

From within

Drown me out

Fight hard

Fall fast with doubt

Pull me in

Kill me slow

Dark light

Bright night

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write... love the way it all comes full circle in the end just slightly different. Good work :)

[Daisygirl]

Thank you Aron!

[Joey Calvo]

You reviewed my story, so I'm returning the favor! Otherwise, awesome poem! Poems have always fascinated me, i'm just not that best at writing them...I'll just stick to stories. Good work! :)

[Daisygirl]

Thanks, I used to feel the same way about poetry, so there's hope!

[Sydney]

This has really nice rhythm, and it's composed very well. You opened and closed smoothly so it all ties in. Nice work

[Daisygirl]

Thank you so much!