My Only

My Only

A Poem by Dream Angel
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My mind is spinning
as I hear your voice.
And it is sweeter
Than any other noise.

I cannot think
while this music plays.
Your song surrounds me,
and in my heart it shall stay.

But I know our time is short;
and these melodies will not last forever.
You are saying you last words;
although mine are not yet put together.

This has been my first lesson
in this fine art.
It is time to say goodbye.
It is time to part.

Thank you for your charm,
and your warm smile.
You taught me love.
About that, I could write a mile.

© 2009 Dream Angel


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Dream Angel
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This is sweet and charming. That is all I can really say about that. It brought a smile to face and brought back old memories.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow. That's really all I can say. It's such a beautiful story. When you come back, you need to get in Creative Writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I like this! I agree with Twistd1. Tender is a very good word to describe this poem. Very well written...great piece! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Tender- would describe my first impression. Of perhaps, a first love? or encounter?
"Your song surrounds me"- this line- was the 'catch'- feeling. Consuming, and able to feel your love. Well thought out line. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Dream Angel
Dream Angel

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I am a Lubbock Tx girl who is funny, insesitive, generous, loveing, caring, devoted, stupid, and a lot of other things but i can't remember them all. I love to read and that has inspired me to write. .. more..

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A Poem by Dream Angel