What The Heck

"You have alot of options,"

he says completely unaware

of the misery

he is putting you though.

"Jump off a bridge,

chug down a bottle of your meds,

buy a rope." (I'm not gonna go into details.)

He says its your choice.

He says you would be happier.

He could be right.

He could know what its like,

to not have a purpose,

to not be wanted,

and to not be loved.

Well there,

in the depths of my aching heart,

I know there is one.

Who wants me,

and who needs me.

He is waiting,

to see if I made the right choice.

To see if I will join him,

when the time is right.

He is there.

Will I get it over with?

Or will I answer his call,

of patience?

Author's Note

please ignor mistakes i write in spur of the moment really often. will edit l8r

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Very interesting!
I loved the fact that this poem had a story behind it, and you described the mood and atmosphere of it very well. The shortness of each of the lines was very effective and really helped to set the tone of this piece. The lines which I felt I could relate most to was:
well there
in the depths of my heart
i know there is one
who wants me
who needs me

I do however, encourage that you proof-read your work as there are a few typos, but other than that, this was a very honest, heartfelt poem. Well done,
~PaperHearts

[KimmiChristine(:]

Wow very very good. I can totally relate to this poem on so many levels! Very depressing but I can just feel the emotion. Awesome awesome job :)