Heartfelt

Heartfelt

A Poem by Dream Hunter
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A short dialogue in the form of poetry between two good friends, comforting each other in times of hardship.

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Skye:
To break a heart
To heal it
To break a soul
To mend it
To shatter a world
A heart
A soul
A brokenhearted 
friend in need.

Jazz:
To heal a broken heart
To mend a broken soul
To give a broken heart and soul
The help and love it needs.
This is my sole compassion
This is my sole quest
Together we shall fight
Those who shatter our fragile worlds.

Skye:
Fear is always in our hearts
A cold finger 'round our souls
But with our friends
Fear not the things
We must brave in life alone.
Instead discard the lives we led
Of wicked, miserable deeds
That sprouted from our loneliness
And the friends we did not heed
So now, my friend, please take my hand
And lead me where you may
And heal my broken heart and soul
With your friendship every day.

© 2012 Dream Hunter


Author's Note

Dream Hunter
When I am not so happy, I get inspiration from my friends that cheer me up, all the time. Thank you to all my awesome friends! :)

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Really nice poem! Refreshing. Cheered me up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is Awesome XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is soooo sweet ^-^

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so sweet, I love it ^^

I agree with you in that the person you refer to is a great friend :D

Lalalala♪ *randomly singing* Awesome job! *v*

Posted 12 Years Ago


Friendship is one of the most important things in life and if we don't have friends we don't really have much. Your poem is beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


Aw, this was adorable! A poem of beauty and dedication to loved ones this is.... I can guess who Jazz is, ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem! Beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think it's great. It sounds nice even though the last stanza (is that the right word?) doesn't rhyme.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Yay! I feel appreciated! Even though that's not MY name... Great job! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are very lucky to have a good friend like this:) A superb poem. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 10, 2012
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Tags: friends, comfort, comforting, hardship, heart, soul, break, in, need, shatter, world, dialogue, good, poetry, encouraging, encouragement

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