Heartfelt

A short dialogue in the form of poetry between two good friends, comforting each other in times of hardship.

Skye:

To break a heart

To heal it

To break a soul

To mend it

To shatter a world

A heart

A soul

A brokenhearted 

friend in need.

Jazz:

To heal a broken heart

To mend a broken soul

To give a broken heart and soul

The help and love it needs.

This is my sole compassion

This is my sole quest

Together we shall fight

Those who shatter our fragile worlds.

Skye:

Fear is always in our hearts

A cold finger 'round our souls

But with our friends

Fear not the things

We must brave in life alone.

Instead discard the lives we led

Of wicked, miserable deeds

That sprouted from our loneliness

And the friends we did not heed

So now, my friend, please take my hand

And lead me where you may

And heal my broken heart and soul

With your friendship every day.

Author's Note

When I am not so happy, I get inspiration from my friends that cheer me up, all the time. Thank you to all my awesome friends! :)

Reviews

[Freckled Princess]

This is the finest poem of them all. Certainly the most great ,I've read, of all time. The most beloved. Your command of feelings, the most magnificent. You transformed the feelings you seemed be going through into ecstatic beauty. Pain is easy to portray but to use your passion and pain to portray the ecstasy and joy and magnificence of our world... No one I know has ever done it before. Perhaps no one ever will again. To my mind, that strange feeling I get when I read this... that is not only one of the finest poems I have ever read, but it provokes me to move on too.

[Manpreet]

Awesome poem!

[Nicole]

Very intriguing. A very entertaining read.

[Megg]

Great job! Very unique!

[Desiree S.]

I loved it! The conversational poem between two friends was a nice touch. This is the first time I have read one of your works and it is different from others I have read but nonetheless I enjoyed it. xD

[The Scholar]

This was such a great poem. So refreshing! It also gave me a kind of chilling feeling, maybe because of the repetition, and then the lines,

"Fear is always in our hearts
A cold finger 'round our souls"

but then at the end, I felt all warm inside. Really sweet.

[Fairytale]

I like the dialogue between the two friends. Great idea!

[CHRIS ANDES]

it seems like a song created out of love
=]

[HaruHau-Chan]

This reminds me of either a musical or some sort of play. Either way, it could be used, and I found it quite brilliant. Keep up the wonderful writing. ^^