Nightlight

The silent beauty of the moon.

The sickle moon

Wanes

Day by day

Hovering majestically

Like a lantern

Among the candles 

Of the starlit sky.

Author's Note

Another poem! Enjoy!

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Reviews

[patricia]

Beautiful... word picture...floaty, you capture something dreamy here.

[patricia]

you created a nice picture here. nice idea to see the moon as a lantern among candles. Lovely.

[Manpreet]

Nice work!

[Jazique]

Guess it kind of gose with your morning poem in a certain way. Instead the stary night that guides only one light above us when darkness arrives. Anyways well done. can't wait to see what other inspirationn you have .

[CrimsonBlaze]

Lol I feel like Aeris too. I, personally like the soft glow of the moon, and you particularly put those thoughts, and details all onto this poem. I say this was short and sweet to the point. Overall , outstanding write!

[Dark Aeris]

I particularly like this piece. Somehow the way you worded it just fits it...almost perfectly... "Hovering majestically/ like a lantern /among the candles/ of the starlit sky."

Just... plain.. beautiful :]

[A. L. Allen]

This is a very beautiful, fluent piece. The imagery is absolutely stunning.

Keep up the great work! :D

[Nima M]

I never used to care that much for poetry, but after reading this, I think I change my mind

[The XYZ Writer]

You know your poems are really nice. Seriously, I really do like them. :) Keep it up!

[Nicole]

Very lyrical. Simple but profound. You don't need long lines and complicated metaphors to make a piece of writing beautiful... your work is evidence of that!