Song of Dawn

Sunrise over a forest

The day is yet to dawn

But when the sun climbs 

Above the treetops

At last

The forest awakes

Into the harmonious

Symphony

Of life.

Author's Note

I got my inspiration for this from looking back at camping pictures and seeing the beauty of the fields and forests around me. Enjoy!

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Reviews

[patricia]

Soft and inviting a warm pleasant expectancy. Great start.

[patricia]

i liked your use of the word (climbs) in this piece. image, italics and movement give this a great feel.

[Manpreet]

Great read!

[Summer'sBreeze]

So beautiful

[Jazique]

Nice sweet, flowing, short, and peaceful in a sort of way. As a singifcance of morning rise of a new day in nature and life.

[CrimsonBlaze]

It's short, but the length doesn't matter cuz the poems beautiful just the way it is. You can picture things perfectly by just reading it once, and you're good at poetry too ^_^

[Nima M]

excellent! it's short, but descriptive. I think you're great at writing

[The XYZ Writer]

Very brief, but beautiful. :) I loved it.

[Nicole]

Beautiful! :)

[Susanna F]

Beautiful! It is brief, but you captured the air of expectancy at dawn.