Sorry?

This is a poem I made to Josh...

You're finally saying sorry
After all the times you've dissed me
I thought it was over
But you're crawling back to me
You still think I like you
Well, you're a fool just like I was
You used to be nothing to me
I guess it should've stayed that way
I was crazy for thinking there was a chance
But now I realize that chance was just in my dreams
And dreams are meant for sleeping
Now I know it's never gonna happen
And you don't need a guy to complete your life
Everyone say its okay
But everything's not okay
Nothing will ever be okay
Because nobody's perfect
And we're different in our own way
You changed my life
You're the only thing that made me feel like I had a heart
And now you've just broken it
Maybe it's my fault for liking you
But you didn't have to be such a jerk about it
No one will ever like me, he says
There's 2,000 guys out there, you say
What am I supposed to do?
Neither of these are advice to me!
I always thought of holding onto my dreams
But now they're slipping out of my grasp
And my tears fall around me because no one cares
Then it turns to suicidal
Everyone cares now!
They say death doesn't help
But you don't help either
So what matters?
Everybody has a secret
So I'm not the only one

Author's Note

Very dramatic....

Reviews

[EllaLurve]

He's a jerk -.-

[Starrbitt]

you did really good...i could relate to it A LOT!

[Thea]

I can really relate to it...You did a great job...Good luck to your next poems... ^^

[Ashli The Amazing]

i thought it was very nice. very dramatic indeed. you had a pretty nice structure too [:

[gothicchica]

i lllllllllooooooooovvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeedddddddddd it!!!!!!!!!!!

[lovely-livia]

nice! whats inspired you?? hahaha jk