Broken

November 2011

Daily struggle

   Twisting

      Deep

         Pain

Broken without sores

   Tendons taut

      Snapping

         Lost

Feeling useless

   Inadequate

      Forgotten

         Worn

Searching for peace

For calm

For sanity

For me

Strength eludes me

   Progress slow

      Tedious

         Persistent

Breathe

   Wait

      Work

         Patience

Author's Note

This is a reference to my struggles with my RSI..it's a daily boulder I carry.

Reviews

[Hoosier Belle]

Loved the ending, This is wonderful, like the set up as well. Deep profound piece. Awesome!

[quinfinn]

i am thrilled by the format you have used here. i'm a huge fanatic of e.e.cummings
and this style is deeply reminiscent of that genre. beautifully done!

[Me]

you are so intense! another fantastic write

[....]

Wow, I love this, Quite awesome because at times I feel this way as well. It''s an emotional cycle I go through often myself.

[Thea]

Very well described...Such a painful torment...
But these lines...
"Searching for peace
For calm
For sanity
For me"
...Can change your feeling when the right time comes that you'll be able to find it...
Great piece...Well done... :)))