Inner Music
A Poem by
Dragonflyz
June 2008
On a journey I seek myself The rest of me That which is hidden Screaming to be seen Quieted long ago Take a look Scared? No longer No more fear Face demons Explore self Breathe...be Passionate, deep Scarred, hurting Scared, moving Inner dance Guarded Compassion Fear subsides Safe..able to be Hear the music Lower defenses Layer by layer Feel the sun Warm...loving Dance Just dance
© 2011 Dragonflyz
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Totally awesome !!
Posted 13 Years Ago
lovely poem :)
I love the flow and how the words fit together :D
love it :)
Posted 13 Years Ago
lovely poem :)
I love the flow and how the words fit together :D
love it :)
A nice flow of words. I like the places you took me. We can do and feel many things. Key to living. Find the sun, friendship and dance. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
A nice flow of words. I like the places you took me. We can do and feel many things. Key to living. Find the sun, friendship and dance. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote
Emerging... breaking free - reaching beyond our shadows... and living.
I like the heart of this one.
Chris
Posted 13 Years Ago
Emerging... breaking free - reaching beyond our shadows... and living.
I like the heart of this one.
Chris
very nice, it really comes alive in my mind
Posted 13 Years Ago
very nice, it really comes alive in my mind
"Layer by layer
Feel the sun
Warm...loving
Dance" ~ I love the imagery and flow of this... Nice write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
"Layer by layer
Feel the sun
Warm...loving
Dance" ~ I love the imagery and flow of this... Nice write!
this poem is marvellous to read - brilliantly composed
Posted 13 Years Ago
this poem is marvellous to read - brilliantly composed
Thank you for this well written piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you for this well written piece.
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Added on October 19, 2011
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Dragonflyz Windsor, Canada
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I am forever learning about myself, always on that path that is me and all I am. I stray from the path from time to time, but that too is a learning experience. I started to write poetry in my teens..
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