I hate you.

I gave you everything I had.

My soul.

Now you've just gone and left me behind.

Forgotton about me.

I never forgot you.

 I hate you so f*****g much.

I hope you get what you deserve.

I'm in pain.

I'm so sad.

Because of you I'm afraid of falling in love again.

Reviews

[Emily]

I Just love the meaning of the poem and your wording! Good job Tatiana!

[Tatiana Casali]

Thank you very much. You are very kind.

[idiotproof--1]

this is really good for how short it is. I love how much emotion you got through in so little words. The I hope you get what you deserve line feels a little out of place though (that's just my opinion) aside from that though this was really good.

[Tatiana Casali]

Thanks :) I appreciate the comment.

[C. Rose]

Great job showing this emotion for most of the poem. It peaks at "I hate you so f*****g much".
After that it goes downhill (JUST IN MY OPINION). Especially the last three lines felt like telling not showing (again JUST IN MY OPINION).

Thank you for sharing this.

[Tatiana Casali]

It's okay. I'm not offended the slightest bit. But I will inform you that it goes from sadness to anger then back to sadness towards the end. Plus I don't really consider this a poem. More like a piece of my dairy. And Your welcome!

[C. Rose]

I see the sad-anger-sad now. I think I was confused because the "Because of you" sounded angry in my head. Consider cutting the last line down to "I'm afraid of falling in love again" to make it solidly in the sad zone.

Glad you're not offended. I get super self-conscious editing poems because there are no 'right' answers.

[Tatiana Casali]

I understand perfectly.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cob..]

:'( I-I'm so sorry. You know I'm here for you

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

I know exactly how the narrator feels in this piece. You really expressed their pain (in very little words, bravo) :) I enjoyed this