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A Poem by Drakana Wind
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Afraid of you

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I used to be afraid of monsters

And men who'd come take me away.

Then I'd run to you in fear,

And in your arms I'd stay.

 

Now you sit beside me,

And I wish to run away in fear,

Or that those men and monsters'd come

To take me anywhere but here. 

© 2009 Drakana Wind


Author's Note

Drakana Wind
This kind of came to me as I was about to fall asleep just now, and I had to write it down. I have no title for it, as of yet, but suggestions are welcome. The same welcome goes for critiques, as well.

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Ohh, I really like this. It's got a really nice flow and I love the concept of it. As for a title maybe something simple, like "Fear" or something like that. ...I don't know it's late and I'm tired and I'm not that good at titles XD

-Howl

Posted 15 Years Ago



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