Operation Flower Petals

A report of an investigation into the emotions of the subject toward the investigator

 I am conducting this investigation in order to prove the assumption that the subject in question is in possession of emotions toward the investigator corresponding to her own for him.  The details are as follows: the subject has never admitted to anything to the investigator (note: speaking to him has proven to be difficult; smoother communication will be necessary during further investigation), however research has developed some evidence that can be used to prove that which under investigation.  The evidence is as follows:

 

1.) The subject has been caught looking at the investigator with a nearly non-interpretable expression.  Usually, the expression appears to be that of wanting that which he cannot have.  In addition, when caught, the subject does either one of two things: first, he may look away as if he was not guilty; secondly, he may hold the gaze of the investigator.  Admittedly, the investigator is guilty of both accusations.

 

2.) On more than one occasion the subject tried to force the investigator to smile, and even once, he attempted to make her laugh.  These attempts have proven to be persistent, maybe even desperate at times due to his act of kneeling on the floor in order to force the investigator into laughter.  It must be noted that all of the subject’s attempts at forcing the investigator to smile were successful, however his attempt at forcing her to laugh only resulted in her smiling, not laughing.

 

3.) The subject called the investigator his friend on at least two occasions even though the investigator has not been as open in communication with him as friends normally are in the habit of being with each other.  The first instance was not directed toward the investigator herself, but instead toward one of her spies.  By this time, the investigator had known the subject for approximately six months but had had fewer legitimate conversations with him.  The second instance was the subject’s closing of a letter given to the investigator, and therefore directed toward the investigator herself.

 

4.) This is an incident directly related to the first instance of the third given piece of evidence.  It happened during the high school lunch period on a weekday approximately a week and a half before the fourteenth of February.  It was on this day that the investigator received a report with details on the compatibility of certain people in a given population with herself; according to the document, the subject was the most compatible male in the given population with the investigator.  Approximately ten to fifteen minutes later, the spy investigated the subject on her own accord and returned with the following results:

The subject had also received his own personal report of the same type that the investigator had; the investigator appeared to have placed second in compatibility with him.  (Note: find out who placed first.)  When the given information was mentioned by the spy, the subject asked the spy whether or not she knew if the investigator liked him.  The spy refused to disclose the confidential information and instead acted confused and unsure.

 

5.) The subject went at great lengths to attend a personal function hosted by the investigator.  Although unable to truly attend, the subject stopped by in order to give the investigator a card and gift even though the details include that the function was approximately one half of an hour away from a separate function hosted by the family of the subject, which he was expected to attend.  The subject confessed four times under no pressure from the investigator or any of her spies that he wished to stay at the function hosted by the investigator.

 

This case is not closed.  Although there appears to be enough evidence to prove the subject’s emotions toward the investigator to be equivalent of hers toward him, such assumptions cannot be proven as fact until the subject confesses directly to the investigator.  Until then, the investigator will continue to glean information from her inside sources and attempt to find more evidence proving her assumption.

Author's Note

Although based on reality, this really not how I think of my crush. Honestly, if it was, no wonder why I've never had a boyfriend.
Anyway, could you critique it as blatantly and as much as possible?

Reviews

[Mioki]

I'm not sure if it was supposed to make me laugh, but I couldn't help but see s girl in a trench coat, holding a magnifying glass and taking notes as a boy eats lunch. This write was wonderfully creative, and set up the scene of an investigation perfectly. It was so matter of fact, which contradicts the whole matter of love. You carried out that same style in the entire piece, without relenting, and that takes skill.

Overall, I enjoyed this piece. And the name "Operation Flower Petals,", that's pure genius. Kudos on this write.

[Tallulah]

I loved it!. Its great. I love the lay out and the way its written. Great job.
with love,
Tallulah

[Lexi Nicole]

I love this! It's really personal, and very, very clever. I love how you laid out all the information like it was a detective's report or something to that effect. The formatting is great. Good job!

-Howl