My Saving Grace

A Poem by Drakana Wind

Everything was wrong
I was running out of time
Out of breath, out of hope

Everything was caving in
I was falling, going under
Reaching my breaking point

Until I saw your face
The smile that you gave me
Was my saving grace

© 2009 Drakana Wind

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Daydreamer54

nice poem. it's short,simple, and cute! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

Satchmo's Gal

The rhythmings a little of, but all in all I like it. Great poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on June 8, 2009

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Drakana Wind

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