Beyond Happiness

My thoughts on my life right now

    The rain patters against my windowpane, an unsteady rhythm matching the beat of my heart.  My heart pounds in time to music of my life.  I dance to the music of my life.  The dance is unchoreographed; it takes me where it will.  Where it has taken me is beyond the borders of my imagination, to a land of unfathomed joy.  Such a joy that has spurned from hope, a glorious hope.  This is a hope that I what feel for the one person I like in no other way I’ve liked any way before feels the same for me.  For if that were to come true, it would take me beyond happiness.  Beyond happiness would be like a rainbow after listening to the rain as it patters against my windowpane. 

Author's Note

I haven't written a story in forever and my goal when I sat down was to write fiction based on reality. This isn't really fiction. Oh well, please critique!

Reviews

[Asteria]

it is refreshing to read a view on life from a positive perspective! Great work

[Lexi Nicole]

I love this, it describes my own thoughts sometimes. I like how you just let go and wrote. Good job!

-Howl