Burning Heart
A Poem by
.::$h円€R€DRø$€::.
Steps of breaking up and How much it hurts
Mouths talking
Smiles dropping
Tears falling
Heart skipping
Face covering
Insides dieing
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Hair pulling
Eye twitching
Blood boiling
Heart slowing
Fist clenching
Teeth grinding
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Body weak
Skin white
Blood cold
Heart stopping
Body dropping
Gun Gripping
© 2011 .::$h円€R€DRø$€::.
Author's Note
Please please please review I totally did this out of my head like right on the spot i'm so proud of it i think it shows exactly how everyone feels after a break up. I know some people might read it and think it might be a very abusive relationship but no its not its just how people might feel after someone breaks up with them.
Reviews
-.- well people with broken hearts like mine understand
Posted 13 Years Ago
not for ppeople with pervertive minds
Posted 13 Years Ago
not for ppeople with pervertive minds
>.< no its not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its about break ups
Posted 13 Years Ago
>.< no its not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its about break ups
I DID!!!! ITS SEX I SWEAR!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I DID!!!! ITS SEX I SWEAR!!!
>.< read the whole thing and not just that one line!!!!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
>.< read the whole thing and not just that one line!!!!!!
Is this about sex????
Posted 13 Years Ago
Is this about sex????
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 17, 2011
Last Updated on November 28, 2011
Author
.::$h円€R€DRø$€::. Sandusky, OH
About
Imagination is everything to me, I day dream alot which makes me write alot.
I love stories about love, mystery, and fantasy (dragon mostly)
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