Burning Heart

Burning Heart

A Poem by .::$h円€R€DRø$€::.
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Steps of breaking up and How much it hurts

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Mouths talking
Smiles dropping
Tears falling
Heart skipping
Face covering
Insides dieing 
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Hair pulling
Eye twitching 
Blood boiling
Heart slowing
Fist clenching
Teeth grinding
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Body weak
Skin white
Blood cold
Heart stopping
Body dropping
Gun Gripping

© 2011 .::$h円€R€DRø$€::.


Author's Note

.::$h円€R€DRø$€::.
Please please please review I totally did this out of my head like right on the spot i'm so proud of it i think it shows exactly how everyone feels after a break up. I know some people might read it and think it might be a very abusive relationship but no its not its just how people might feel after someone breaks up with them.

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-.- well people with broken hearts like mine understand

Posted 12 Years Ago


not for ppeople with pervertive minds


Posted 12 Years Ago


>.< no its not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its about break ups

Posted 12 Years Ago


I DID!!!! ITS SEX I SWEAR!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


>.< read the whole thing and not just that one line!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Is this about sex????

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 17, 2011
Last Updated on November 28, 2011

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.::$h&aring;&dagger;&dagger;&euro;R&euro;DR&oslash;$&euro;::.
.::$h円€R€DRø$€::.

Sandusky, OH



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Imagination is everything to me, I day dream alot which makes me write alot. I love stories about love, mystery, and fantasy (dragon mostly) more..

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