Sweet Sweet Sound

Let the music take flight
into the deep, dark, night
Let it beat against our ear
for all the world to hear
Let it soothe the ocean
calm the commotion
music is a virtue
that we must pursue
Let it into your mind
and join all man kind
In the beauty to unfurl
like an iridescent pearl

Author's Note

I like music a lot...it's my escape, hence why I wrote this.

Reviews

[Castonovia]

Catchy beat... very upbeat tune that lifts the soul just like music does. The rhythmic cadences, the grooving harmony that has us joining together in song, and true indeed. Very well penned, dazzling piece ;)

[seeeker78]

I love it
"like an iridescent pearl"

Tres catchy, almost tapping my feet to it ;)

[Black]

well, your feelings ae good
but watch your capalization its like
Capital letter
cappital letter
Not cappital letter,
make it consistend?
because it is pretty disturbing,

[Daniel Atkinson]

Nailed it. That's exactly how music is for me, and I'd say mostly everyone. You captured that feeling very well.

[Tasha]

I enjoyed this, it was very creative.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your very creative work this morn...Sunflower

[OT]

I really like this one!! strong couplet foundation, nice unforced rhymes, strong images and language (iridescent pearl - calm the commotion) - very well written!! great!!