No Longer

I have nothing left to give
I no longer wish to live
Yet I can't escape this life
That pierces like a knife
I no longer wish to see
Yet, no matter how I plea
I know I will not die

so I will cry
             cry
              cry

Reviews

[Katie Marie]

I like this one...i know that sometimes there are those times that people are so overwhelmed by emotions that all they can do is cry...ive had a few of these moments my self...

keep on writing :)

[Viki Rachel]

The part of this poem I shall cherish the most in my memory of this exquisite piece is the ending;
"so I will cry
cry
cry"
I too like to repeat the ending words of a stanza or poem altogether (as you can see in The City)