What I See

I see what I wish not to see,

                                       What I see is me

 In all my shame

                        I shall never be the same

In all my pain

                         To you my heart is slain

In all my pride

                         I walk in stride

 

Author's Note

I dunno...this just came from the heart, so if it only makes since to me, oh well screw you :D

Reviews

[Viki Rachel]

I like this one a lot, too. Some of the short poems are often the best.
I like this one because the rhyme is good and it seems impulsive (which, as you probably can guess from my poems), and that is always my favorite way to write a poem-- don't think too much, just do it! Anyway, I see you did this from the author's note. My favorite part is:
"In all my pride
I walk in stride".

[Markymark]

The shifting margins, nearly gave me a headache like most of Cummings poetry does, but this piece expresses a shifty kind of dual talk with ones self while stating and being stated to at the same time...and it works.

Good write--

Mark

[Collette Paige]

Thank you ^_^