Fallen Angels

It was originally a haiku. I think three lines isn't enough so I kind of changed the haiku format of it. It still goes 5 7 5 but it's more than three lines. 5 7 5 7 5 5 7 5 etc. etc.

Fallen angels cry
Their tears drip from the night sky
Beautiful Creatures
Cursed to live on earth
Damned for all eternity
Crying for their loss
For their lives and souls
They will never be the same
Fallen Angels Cry
Tears dripping from the night sky
Wonderful Creatures

Author's Note

Yes, the ending is supposed to be similar to the beginning but not exact. This is exactly how I wish it to be, and I very much like how it came out.

Reviews

[OT]

nice!! I like the mirror effect of the beginning and end - makes it circular - the story complete almost! well written!! nice concept - the angels trapped on earth - perhaps we all our who knows - maybe only some will go back to the sky and others will fall!! lots of interpretations! nice!

[Viki Rachel]

It's beautiful Collette(: I'm so proud of you!

[Layla Night]

i like your poem.
you poem sound like something people could write stories and books from.