Deserve

Health is a virtue

                             that no one deserves.

sickness is a punishment

                                  that everyone needs.

Thirst is a pain

                                  that nobody wants

wealth is a pleasure

                                  that nobody needs

hunger is a hurt

                                  that everyone is scared of

Author's Note

I was just thinking about how so many people take what they have for granted...

Reviews

[Collette Paige]

Thank you you guys!!! I love the things you say about my writing. :]

[OT]

I like the layout of this one! almost like an argonelle (content wise - not form) - the questions and answers! and very correct questions to be debating!! nice!

[Viki Rachel]

Wow, this is so powerful, Collette. You wielded a few words into a whole dark (and truthful) poem. Your words are so very true.
Like I said when we were texting, you do have a talent.