Those mysterious freedoms

Those mysterious freedoms

A Poem by The Ugly Rose

The radiating power

The immense energy

The bands of concentration

The bonds of trust

 

A guardian on the Grand Tree

Perched so silently

Ever still

Ever strong

 

Two girls

Conducting the circle

The beam of light

Violet and rose

 

The Goddess ever surrounding

All powerful

All influential

Ever divine

 

We are the ones who lived

Lived beyond the lines

Bathed in the righteous water

Became the birds of the world

We are those who freed ourselves

 

It’s your turn…

 

© 2009 The Ugly Rose


Author's Note

The Ugly Rose
July 26, 09

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This is stunning Emma :). I love love love love LOVE LOVE
"Lived beyond the lines
Bathed in the righteous water
Became the birds of the world"

As if becoming the guardian perched on the branch. That's so amazing, love the connection :) if that was intentional. If not....it's still beautiful.

100% :D
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wow is all i can say feel like i just ran straight into a wall of water truly
amazed me absolutely beautiful
truly stunning work

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is stunning Emma :). I love love love love LOVE LOVE
"Lived beyond the lines
Bathed in the righteous water
Became the birds of the world"

As if becoming the guardian perched on the branch. That's so amazing, love the connection :) if that was intentional. If not....it's still beautiful.

100% :D
AND
favourited


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Overall, I would say this is a strong, powerful piece. It is great to see a piece with religious undertones - especially when those tones are Pagan in nature. Well Done!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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