The ride

Written after a horse ride

The sun through the branches

The mist on the mountains

The rocking of the beast,

The beast that I ride

 

The clatter of the rocks

As they tumble and flee

We cross the line

That seperates

Man and paradise

 

This a true and only

Paradise for the gods

Author's Note

July '09

Reviews

[Sasavet]

Love ittt :)
"This a true and only
Paradise for the Gods."

Perfect ending. and it's so true. Horse back riding is the best, and this poem makes me remember why i love it so much and it makse me miss it. Very nice work deary :)

[D. Pesek]

I liked it, the first few lines were my favorite. The whole poem sounded good, but those lines really stood out to me.