Dear Adoration

Dear Adoration

A Poem by The Ugly Rose
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Physics Class (February 5th)

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Dear Love,

I saw you that day

Sitting on the stairs

I saw the fleeting hope

Hidden in your eyes

I saw the courage it took

To sit there each day

And be you

Instead of them

 

Dear Love,

You showed up at the theatre

With only your sister

I knew it was no coincidence

Since I'd told you of it before

We sat together

Ignoring the film

Instead we felt

The radiating love to be

From the other's body.

 

Dear Friend,

When I was lost

You held the torch

To light the ever obvious path

You took my hand

And pulled me home

You kept me close

Even when I pushed away.

 

Dear Friend,

When all my hope was gone

And I had once again

Been thrown into doubt

You kept pushing your way

Right back to me

You kept yourself in my eyes

So I could see the truth

When I pushed so hard against you

You still kept holding me tight.

 

Dear Guardian,

When I was kicked down

You kicked them back

So they fell hard

I was picked back up agian

By your great care.

 

Dear Love,

It's plain to see

Even though I am young

Foolish,

Doubtful,

Rebellious..

You stay by me.

For that

You've earned the title

Of my Dear sweet Love.

© 2009 The Ugly Rose


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"even though i am yound."
I think you mean young dear :P
I like this though. It's deep and romantic.

Willow is proud XD

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very nicely penned, great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 6, 2009
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The Ugly Rose
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