The Imaginative Mind

The Imaginative Mind

A Poem by ~Dragon X
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I am writing about what I write. :D Spur of the moment.

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Waves crash and tumble over
the ship floats no more
nose up,
rest sunk.

Then suddenly
I'm in flowery feathery
a meadow with birds and flowers
The sun shines, darkness cowers.

The world shifts,
I am in an audience, performers dancing swift,
juggling fire and swallowing swords,
musicians playing cords.

A shouting in the distance...
A hand is waved in my face.
It's my mom.
I'm late for school again.

© 2011 ~Dragon X


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~Dragon X
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Haha, I like this a lot. :) I have definitely had those days where my mind just does not want to stay put on one thing for very long. Nicely done! :)
I know that this was spur of the moment, but I have some constructive criticism. In your second stanza, it would probably be best to delete the 'a' in front of meadow. It kind of stunts the flow of the words. Other than that, great job! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Great job! very interesting :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha :) Funny. I know exactly what you mean ;) Nice, simple, funny poem. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Fixed and thank you! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha, I like this a lot. :) I have definitely had those days where my mind just does not want to stay put on one thing for very long. Nicely done! :)
I know that this was spur of the moment, but I have some constructive criticism. In your second stanza, it would probably be best to delete the 'a' in front of meadow. It kind of stunts the flow of the words. Other than that, great job! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 3, 2011
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Tags: imagination, creativity, fun, dreaming, dreams

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