Haha, I like this a lot. :) I have definitely had those days where my mind just does not want to stay put on one thing for very long. Nicely done! :)
I know that this was spur of the moment, but I have some constructive criticism. In your second stanza, it would probably be best to delete the 'a' in front of meadow. It kind of stunts the flow of the words. Other than that, great job! :)
Hehe, I've never been late for school in my life. -nerd-
That's mainly because my mom woke me up two hours in advance? There was no room for excused, haha.
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It's nice to be able to relate to this writing piece. :)
Great flow, the last line didn't killed the rhyming but it was still wonderful.
Yeah, I get this all the time. And I'm CERTAINLY not five. LOL I love the flow! It's a cute, totally relatable little poem. I JUST LOVE ALL YOUR POEMS!!!
~Jasmine Thousand~
Lol! This was happening just this morning! But I can't ever be late for school now since I'm homeschooled. Once suggestion though, maybe take out the feathery in the second stanza? Its sounds awkward. But its your poem so you decide. Its an awesome poem!!
I experience this a lot! When I am writing my mind travels everywhere until it's disturbed...then I turn grouchy. But anyway great writing; it was very creative.
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I show up once in a blue moon
I'm all over this nifty lil place called wattpad now, but my writing still sucks so don't go there
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