love stoned

just a few random lines that suddenly came up, not for anyone in particular..

I'm standing here like a serenading fool,

looking at you, waiting for a sign,

not hanging around trying to be cool,

just waiting till you're mine.

But somehow there's always something in between,
keeping us apart,
from me being your king and you my queen,

what's a finish without a start?

Reviews

[Black]

i like it

[Kes]

Wow... cool.
:)

[?]

oooooooh now this I like.
The last line summed it all up. Wonderful poem, with an outstanding ending.

[Cherrie Palmer]

very nice, patient and hopeful

[paul]

the last line makes this poem great