It never goes away

As night turns to day,

and darkness is purged by light,

when i see your face,

everything seems right.

 

I can't fight this feeling any longer,

is it the will I lack?

it just keeps getting stronger,

and harder to hold back.

 

Try as i may,

it never goes away.

hoping you see the signs,

i'll be waiting for that day.

 

Reviews

[Elwina]

Very nice. You can't wait any longer, but you'll be waiting. Yearning versus letting go... such a complicated position.

[My Fair Lady]

Heartfelt longing. Nicely penned.

[Marie Harrison]

Sounds like a deep yearning to me. Lovely expression.

[Forgotten]

I love how you describe the that the darkness is "purged by light" wow what a powerful phrase, this is a beautiful poem well done.

[Kes]

Ouch. Cute, I love it.
The flow is great; this is beauty disguised in pain. I love it.
Great write.

[Dushyant Thadani]

sentiments of this work have been beautifully described. Its simple, nice and an eminently beautiful flow is to be seen in this work. Great job man. Good luck. Cheers

[Wondering Mind]

love's longings lead limbs to limp.
Nicely flowing write.

[Bard Constantine]

Wistful sentiments, tenderly expressed. This flowed quite well; nice job...

[silver threaded queen]

wow. it is so realistic.loved it!!!

[?]

oh wow, I love this, gosh seems as though your poems are writing about my situation. lol
I love it
Flows so nice and smooth,