Waiting for you

Just one chance,

thats all i've ever desired.

to show you how much I care,

you're the only one i've always admired.

I wish I could be with you,

I wish we were more than friends.

but life is unforgiving,

and fate makes it's own ends.

It hurts to know,

that we can never be together.

hoping you'll change your mind,

I'll wait forever.

Reviews

[hmm]

This is wonderful, enjoyable read

[Lilly]

this is very beautiful. a very tender and relatable piece. i like the rhyme used- it creates a nice melody for this poem. you have expressed the longing, wishing, pain and waiting of the situation nicely.
great poem

[?]

I can relate to this,
very nicely written

[WriterMe]

This was really nice. Very touching too. And to know it came from someone I know personally, you just built so much more to your character. I like =] Favorited too.

[Cherrie Palmer]

powerful and a sweet poem of love and hope

[Robin]

this poem spoke to me ......

[Wondering Mind]

Nicely done. You've expressed the experience well.

[Angel Bird]

This is a beautiful write. One can feel the heartache and longing through your words. Who hasn't experienced such? Well done.

[Dushyant Thadani]

Bro you are awesome. I thoroughly enjoyed it. In fact I wrote such things earlier when I had a crush like that. Thanks for reminding me my former writing

[My Fair Lady]

Wow- I like this. It makes me think that more communication was in order. Don't you think that life is too short to be selfish with emotion and love.. I do.