Pull you down

Don't trust the words when he says

 "You're Beautiful" while starin' at your chest

Silly to accept the compliment "...Your bending is the best"

No one can seem to see all your inner beauty

Too busy trying to show them that perfect booty

Room is always filled with that ugly sex smell

Scrub your body in the tub prayin' not to go to hell

All these unGodly intentions

Grew with the mindset: It's good attention

 

At the end of the day nothing fills that hole!

Always left crying alone with a dark tortured soul

 

Revolving in a world tilted just so

Cuddling yourself trying not to let go

Your reflection on the t.v

Legs dangling freely

Eyes never seen clearly ...just darkness where they should be

A soul emanating fire

Skin of ice and Evil Desire

Your flaws are dramatic (-Lies that're Systematic)

Breathing becomes erratic

World shatters to break

The time is : Late

 

Skies have once again claimed an

Anti-Gravitational Soul

 

Author's Note

When writing gets generic

Reviews

[Dani]

World shatters to break
The time is : Late

Really good. My stomach wants to twist.. regardless of whether the reader has personal experience (and could maybe relate) or they don't, this is easy to connect with. And that, I believe, plays a part in good writing. Thanks for sharing this.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

society is such a schizophrenic entity~ feeding us on both sexuality and guilt simultaneously~ heart shattering write~ that last line is absolutely incredible



Anti-Gravitational Soul

[No use.]

maybe its because i was raised in a very devoted Presbyterian Christian household, but i found myself in deep feeling and thought, remembering the times of shame and indelible stench. great use of metaphors to show when writing gets generic

[Solitaire-P0ette]

Wow...that was really deep. I'm lost for words. That was a Wonderful Poem.