Why Soldiers Hate Hot Dogs

Why Soldiers Hate Hot Dogs

A Poem by DrSprinkz73
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My First Haiku

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 Breathe in the Mustard

Ketchup smothering their lungs

  Bloody Massacre!

© 2010 DrSprinkz73


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hmmm. Mustard is an od word that sortof rests between having two and three sylables (depending on how you pronounce it). So in a way you have steped outside of the bouds of formal Haiku's...I like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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DrSprinkz73
DrSprinkz73

Chicago, IL



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I am not a simple person. But I do prefer all the simplicities in life. I can't say it's my dream to become a published writer I ust enjoy what I do. I have goals. I tend to lean towards darker wr.. more..

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