Cryptic Movement

A little different perhaps?

Struck by the hourglass

Stuck in the sour past

And it

Thrills me Poorly

And it

Chills me Sorely

May this Kill me Surely

She screamed

Fill me,Pull me. DON'T PANIC!

While I was right there You looked up But didn't care

Grain by Grain Stealing my Sand!

Burning me as you are...

DON'T PANIC!

Infernal

Eternal

 Internal

Inferno

Frozen in a memory, Somewhere that I shouldn't be.

And it Fills me Slowly... Pulls me Tugging.

Can this Kill me Completely?

She Screamed

 Thrill me,Chill me.DON'T PANIC!

Rocks filling our glass

Author's Note

My fiancee wants to make this a song for his band (Set To Fail)

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

it does read exactly like a sharply pounding rhythmic song~ the construct couldn't be more flawless~ each line laid where it is and formatted as it is builds the surge of the poetic to a gorgeous furios crescendo ~