Underberg

Underberg

A Story by Jason Damstra
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A very brief scrap of a very hungry city.

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Can't... you hear them?


Click... Click clack...The stones...


Click click clacking in the dark... Teeth. Solid and grey.


Can't you feel them?

 

Buzz Buzz buzzing around you? Ancient mortar ground to dust as they click click clack in the dark.


The room is quite now, I have but a moment to write. Here, deep within the bowels of the hidden city. I think this a store-room, but the multitude of chains and unidentifiable stains on the ground make me nervous to even guess at what they could've stored here. The walls, the tunnels... Seem to breath. I know I should be heading East, towards the labyrinth cities mouth, but the further I go the more lost I seem to be. 

Every right a left. Every tunnel up, slopes invariably down. Nothing makes sense anymore. 

Here, here at least the stones seem quieter. No more of those infernal champing, clamping stones. 

I feel it you know? The damned thing. The thing that removed their bodies. 

I couldn't believe it at first, every house empty. Every store closed. Not a scrap of cloth, not a single bone. 

Nothing to say that they ever were. If they fled or if it did... Things to them I could not say, but I feel it, out there, far, far below. 

The dust crackles and air hums with black magic. The oldest I've ever felt. 

It feels me too I'm sure. 

Grinding its granite teeth... 

Patiently waiting for me. 


Only a matter of time now.


Can't you feel it?

© 2016 Jason Damstra


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I liked the first and last lines, resembling poetry more than a story. I like the middle part too, but it felt as if too many ideas were squeezed into a too short a piece of writing.....I think this could easily develop into a novel......

Who is this character?
What is his quest.....?
What does he want to achieve?

Just a few thoughts....:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jason Damstra

7 Years Ago

Hey SV, first off, thank you so much for the feedback :D

In truth I don't really have.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. I am also embarking on the journey of penning a few stories, and sadly, most people.. read more



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I liked the first and last lines, resembling poetry more than a story. I like the middle part too, but it felt as if too many ideas were squeezed into a too short a piece of writing.....I think this could easily develop into a novel......

Who is this character?
What is his quest.....?
What does he want to achieve?

Just a few thoughts....:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jason Damstra

7 Years Ago

Hey SV, first off, thank you so much for the feedback :D

In truth I don't really have.. read more
SleeplessVolcano

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. I am also embarking on the journey of penning a few stories, and sadly, most people.. read more

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Added on August 17, 2016
Last Updated on August 17, 2016
Tags: city, horror, underground, rock, stone, dark

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Jason Damstra
Jason Damstra

Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa



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