Dutch and Dutchess

Invisible Verse.

I'm waiting now.  Waiting for too long for the smoke to clear.  A fire rages inside and I can not see her face.  I know not what she wants and know nothing of what she needs because my rage is blinding.  The smoke can not clear in a continous flame.  I am consumed. 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dutch]

It certainly does yet sometimes I feelas though it is the stuff of life. The trustest form of our being.

[AYVID N]

Rage prevents orderly thinking. Prolonged rage even more so. I stood in the thick of the smoke in this story, felt its deleterious effects.

[Sami Khalil]

It sounded like you are writing a story. Thank you for sharing. Welcome to this site.