Lament of a Primrose Sky

Lament of a Primrose Sky

A Poem by Lonesome Traveler

Together we watched those battles cease,

Together we sung for our sweet new lease.

But time rolled into one, passed us by

And just for a second we dared to live a lie.

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Drink up, they said, say your goodbyes,

We just stood there, with our hushed lullabies

But time rolled into one, passed us by

And just for a second we dared to live a lie.

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Screaming and shouting, frantic yearning,

The acidic stench of my world burning.

But time rolled into one, passed us by

They were tearing up our Primrose sky.

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For three decades I stared into the abyss,

Fading hopes of a reunited bliss.

But time rolled into one, passed us by

Would we even recognise our Primrose Sky?

© 2013 Lonesome Traveler


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Drink up, they said, say your goodbyes,

We just stood there, with our hushed lullabies

But time rolled into one, passed us by

And just for a second we dared to live a lie.

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These are some powerful lines . Well penned ...:) Keep writing my friend...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lonesome Traveler

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate it :) I'll do my best...writing is such a good escape for t.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I agree . You are welcome...



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well written dude love your work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Drink up, they said, say your goodbyes,

We just stood there, with our hushed lullabies

But time rolled into one, passed us by

And just for a second we dared to live a lie.

-
These are some powerful lines . Well penned ...:) Keep writing my friend...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lonesome Traveler

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate it :) I'll do my best...writing is such a good escape for t.. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I agree . You are welcome...

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Lonesome Traveler

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Young, British and naive going on cynical. Searching for the right path, and all that mother jazz. " Pass the parcel, sometimes that's all you can do. Take it, feel it, and pass it on. Not for me, .. more..

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