Untitled (May 29, 2024)

Quick quip, nonsense again.

Words for words, heart to heart,
An exchange of lines, tunes a lark,
Like a cupcake, inflavoured and tart,
This delivery's an arrow, that has missed its mark.

- Stu. T.H. (May 29, 2024)

Reviews

[Green]

I guess my biggest question is, how can something be both unflavored and tart? I figure there's a way, maybe just that no extra flavoring has been added but it's still tart naturally but at first it just feels a little bit like a glaring contradiction. If the point was to make someone stop and think however, mission fully accomplished. I keep reading this over and over again and I can't say I can make much sense of it (although you did say it was nonsense so maybe I'm right on track) but I keep coming back to it. It's just quite fun to read.

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for your read, author Green, it was truly silly scribbles I penned down without second thought, but I'm glad you found it to be something worth your attention.

My original vision, if I recall, was to reflect the subtle fickleness in the natural abilities of humans to comprehend and perceive the world around them. Like an "exchange of lines", might it be inferred as a reader switching up from one line to another and back, or a couple trading words and tunes to each other, would suit the line well.

The poem was not only meant to be read but to create sense of false sense of higher purpose in the minds of man, pointing out an error in the poem itself and the reader if they happen to find themselves quizzed by some higher purpose supposedly hidden away within the poem. Truth is harder to convey than fiction, after all, fiction is known for being 2D, while the truth is apparent, even without being read.

A cupcake, inflavoured, and tart. Perhaps something without a taste, is the perfect object to be placement for your emotions. Tart, is the flavour of a bitter truth, that sometimes there is no higher purpose, especially in a silly poem. Then again, who knows ~ have a nice day, author Green.

- Leon