Senryu: First night amongst the mountains

Deceivous -- It was, but pleasurable.

Hot red summer night
Bathes the minds of the youthful
With premature lust.

- Dan Rastley / Stu. T. H. (January 31, 2023)

Reviews

[Dave Brown]

How true
Possibly speaking from experience??

[Stu. T.H.]

Ah, that's a scary question to answer.
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I hope you enjoyed the short read, author Dave Brown.

[Dave Brown]

✔️ ✔️

[Einstein Noodle]

senrys are such a perfect form says i! well done, in my opinion .. youth doth run away with lust sadly .. it misleads.

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for your visit, author EInstein Noodle, I wish you a fair day and much fortune to accompany your way.

[Einstein Noodle]

back at ya!